Anyway, this poem is very structured, more so than my normal writing. I think its a result of all the research papers.
I have a secret
( When I tear you down it won't be for your insides... )
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Hmmm... I don't know. I don't think she reminds me of the sorb-apples poem. Although I do like connecting the waste portion to "medlars" and "delicious rotteness." Though I don't know if I like connecting her to those things. Maybe I'll just make them V.1 and V.2?